Mock-up Version 2
October 27, 2008
Here is a second version of my site mock-up, thanks for all of th great comments on the earlier attempt. Several people mentioned that the background was washing out the text, that was actually a result of saving the image in the wrong format before converting it to a .GIF, the present version is closer to the look that I am hoping for. Also, I eliminated the small pic in the header and rearranged the text a bit. I may make a few more changes later, but for not I am pretty happy with how it is looking.
As the the other comments, I will be writing another post that will address these along with audience, technology, interactivity, etc. Thanks!
I think this is an improvement over the earlier version, which was also good. Higher contrast but still with the sense of the thing, the images, and I think the slightly ghostly nature of the picture is very appropriate — a hint of the walking dead, which is what many of them were. Thanks for the update.
-Tracy